[cig-commits] r5871 - long/3D/Gale/trunk/documentation

[sue at geodynamics.org]

Author: sue
Date: 2007-01-23 14:38:12 -0800 (Tue, 23 Jan 2007)
New Revision: 5871

Modified:
   long/3D/Gale/trunk/documentation/gale.lyx
   long/3D/Gale/trunk/documentation/gale.pdf
Log:
a few fixes

Modified: long/3D/Gale/trunk/documentation/gale.lyx
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--- long/3D/Gale/trunk/documentation/gale.lyx	2007-01-23 21:57:37 UTC (rev 5870)
+++ long/3D/Gale/trunk/documentation/gale.lyx	2007-01-23 22:38:12 UTC (rev 5871)
@@ -370,7 +370,7 @@
 \end_layout
 
 \begin_layout Standard
-Note that there is no explicit time dependency in the momentum eq.
+Note that there is no explicit time dependency in the momentum equation
  
 \begin_inset LatexCommand \ref{eq:simple momentum conservation}
 
@@ -602,7 +602,7 @@
 
 \end_inset
 
- where 
+where 
 \begin_inset Formula $\frac{D}{Dt}$
 \end_inset
 
@@ -782,8 +782,8 @@
 \begin_layout Standard
 Installation of Gale on a desktop or laptop machine is, in most cases, very
  easy.
- Binary packages have been created for the most common platforms, including
- Linux, Mac OS X, and Windows.
+ Binary packages have been created for the most common platforms, i.e., Linux,
+ Mac OS X, and Windows.
  Installation on other architectures or on parallel machines requires building
  the software from the source code, which can be difficult for inexperienced
  users.
@@ -812,7 +812,7 @@
 \end_layout
 
 \begin_layout Standard
-Only read this if the binaries are not sufficient for you.
+Read this only if the binaries are not sufficient for you.
  
 \end_layout
 

Modified: long/3D/Gale/trunk/documentation/gale.pdf
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(Binary files differ)