[cig-commits] r15332 - in short/3D/PyLith/trunk/doc/userguide: benchmarks/savageprescott materials

[sue at geodynamics.org]

Author: sue
Date: 2009-06-18 11:56:56 -0700 (Thu, 18 Jun 2009)
New Revision: 15332

Modified:
   short/3D/PyLith/trunk/doc/userguide/benchmarks/savageprescott/savageprescott.lyx
   short/3D/PyLith/trunk/doc/userguide/materials/materials.lyx
Log:
fixed minor typos

Modified: short/3D/PyLith/trunk/doc/userguide/benchmarks/savageprescott/savageprescott.lyx
===================================================================
--- short/3D/PyLith/trunk/doc/userguide/benchmarks/savageprescott/savageprescott.lyx	2009-06-18 08:43:25 UTC (rev 15331)
+++ short/3D/PyLith/trunk/doc/userguide/benchmarks/savageprescott/savageprescott.lyx	2009-06-18 18:56:56 UTC (rev 15332)
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-#LyX 1.6.0 created this file. For more info see http://www.lyx.org/
+#LyX 1.6.2 created this file. For more info see http://www.lyx.org/
 \lyxformat 345
 \begin_document
 \begin_header
@@ -435,8 +435,7 @@
  directory in the mesh-specific subdirectory.
  These results may be viewed directly with a package such as ParaView; however,
  to compare results to the analytical solution, some postprocessing is required.
- First, it is necessary to generate analytical results, which may be done
- by going to the 
+ First, generate the analytical results by going to the 
 \family typewriter
 utils
 \family default
@@ -445,7 +444,7 @@
 savpres_ss.py
 \family default
  script.
- This will produce comma-separated-values files for displacements and velocities
+ This will produce comma-delimited files for displacements and velocities
  (
 \family typewriter
 savpres_displ.csv
@@ -464,7 +463,7 @@
 vtkdiff.py
 \family default
 ) that computes velocities from PyLith displacement results.
- To generate velocity results, you can type, for example
+ To generate velocity results, you can type, for example,
 \end_layout
 
 \begin_layout LyX-Code
@@ -478,7 +477,7 @@
 \family default
  directory for the appropriate model.
  This will create a set of VTK files that you can use with ParaView.
- You can generate profile results using ParaView (e.g., the "Plot Over Line"
+ You can generate profile results using ParaView (e.g., the ``Plot Over Line''
  filter).
  By loading the entire time series for the ground surface velocity results,
  it is possible to generate profile results for all time steps.
@@ -511,7 +510,7 @@
 e fits as a function of mesh resolution.
  For this benchmark, it is also important to consider the distance of the
  boundary from the region of interest.
- Also note that the agreement between analytical an numerical solutions
+ Also note that the agreement between analytical and numerical solutions
  is poor for early earthquake cycles, due to the differences in simulating
  the problem, as noted above.
 \end_layout

Modified: short/3D/PyLith/trunk/doc/userguide/materials/materials.lyx
===================================================================
--- short/3D/PyLith/trunk/doc/userguide/materials/materials.lyx	2009-06-18 08:43:25 UTC (rev 15331)
+++ short/3D/PyLith/trunk/doc/userguide/materials/materials.lyx	2009-06-18 18:56:56 UTC (rev 15332)
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-#LyX 1.6.0 created this file. For more info see http://www.lyx.org/
+#LyX 1.6.2 created this file. For more info see http://www.lyx.org/
 \lyxformat 345
 \begin_document
 \begin_header
@@ -508,8 +508,8 @@
 <lyxtabular version="3" rows="5" columns="3">
 <features>
 <column alignment="center" valignment="top" width="1.5in">
+<column alignment="center" valignment="top" width="1.8in">
 <column alignment="center" valignment="top" width="1.5in">
-<column alignment="center" valignment="top" width="1.5in">
 <row>
 <cell alignment="center" valignment="top" topline="true" bottomline="true" leftline="true" usebox="none">
 \begin_inset Text
@@ -694,6 +694,8 @@
 \end_layout
 
 \begin_layout Plain Layout
+
+\family typewriter
 power_law_exponent
 \end_layout
 
@@ -1952,7 +1954,7 @@
 \begin_inset Formula $N$
 \end_inset
 
- is the number of Maxwell models and the variable 
+ is the number of Maxwell models, and the variable 
 \begin_inset Formula $\underline{q}^{i}$
 \end_inset
 
@@ -2558,7 +2560,7 @@
 \end_inset
 
  should thus be used when forming the stiffness matrix.
- We do not presently use this formulation in PyLith 1.3, but it may be included
+ We do not presently use this formulation in PyLith 1.4, but it may be included
  in future versions.
 \end_layout
 
@@ -3552,11 +3554,11 @@
  gravity.
  When performing numerical simulations, however, it is not possible to represent
  the entire time history of rock emplacement.
- Instead, gravity must be 'turned on' at the beginning of the simulation.
+ Instead, gravity must be ``turned on'' at the beginning of the simulation.
  Unfortunately, this results in unrealistic amounts of deformation at the
  beginning of a simulation.
- An alternative is to provide an initial state variables for the region
- under consideration.
+ An alternative is to provide initial state variables for the region under
+ consideration.
  This allows the specification of a set of state variables that is consistent
  with the prior application of gravitational body forces.
  In a more general sense, initial values for state variables may be used
@@ -3577,7 +3579,7 @@
 Since state variables are specific to a given material, initial values for
  state variables are specified as part of the material description.
  By default, initial state values are not used.
- To override this behavior specify a spatial database for the initial stress,
+ To override this behavior, specify a spatial database for the initial stress,
  strain, and/or state variables as in the example from the tutorial in Section
  
 \begin_inset CommandInset ref