[cig-commits] r14236 - seismo/3D/ADJOINT_TOMO/flexwin/latex

[carltape at geodynamics.org]

Author: carltape
Date: 2009-03-05 14:23:19 -0800 (Thu, 05 Mar 2009)
New Revision: 14236

Modified:
   seismo/3D/ADJOINT_TOMO/flexwin/latex/proofs_carl.pdf
   seismo/3D/ADJOINT_TOMO/flexwin/latex/proofs_carl.tex
Log:
Minor updates to proofs comments.


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Modified: seismo/3D/ADJOINT_TOMO/flexwin/latex/proofs_carl.tex
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--- seismo/3D/ADJOINT_TOMO/flexwin/latex/proofs_carl.tex	2009-03-05 22:10:33 UTC (rev 14235)
+++ seismo/3D/ADJOINT_TOMO/flexwin/latex/proofs_carl.tex	2009-03-05 22:23:19 UTC (rev 14236)
@@ -70,7 +70,7 @@
 \begin{enumerate}
 \item p.~17, line 38.  Please change the clause ``seismograms do not agree well with the observed seismograms, especially in the later part of the signal'' to this: ``seismograms agree with the observed seismograms only in the early part of the signal''
 
-\item p.~17. line 50.  $\ldots$ curve, and it is more conspicuous $\ldots$
+\item p.~17. line 50.  Change ``curve, and more conspicuous'' to ``curve, and it is more conspicuous''.
 
 \item p.~17. line 64.  Do not split ``record T'' across the column (or line).
 \end{enumerate}
@@ -79,13 +79,15 @@
 
 \section{Corrections to figures}
 
-There was significant loss and a font error in Figure 17.  I have attached an EPS version of this file, shown used here in \refFig{fig1}.  There should be no loss in converting to PDF for this figure in either the low-res or high-res version of the proofs.
+There appears to be some problem with the resolution of Figure 17, even in the high-resolution version. I have attached an EPS version of this file (2.1 MB), shown used here in \refFig{fig1}.  Hopefully this will solve the problem.
 
+Also note the misplaced label ``\trange{6}{30}'' in the header line of the figure.  There should be a single space after the comma.
+
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 \section{Corrections to references}
 
-Three points were raised (Q4, Q5, Q6) regarding the references.  Unfortunately, we have identified a number of typos, and we list all corrections below, followed by the corrected list of references.
+Three points were raised (Q4, Q5, Q6) regarding the references.  Unfortunately, we have identified a number of our own typos, and we list all corrections below, followed by the list of corrected references.
 
 \begin{enumerate}
 \item \citet{AsterRowe2000} is now correct. Note that the book title should be capitalized.