[cig-commits] r16939 - short/3D/PyLith/trunk/doc/userguide/tutorials/3dhex8

[brad at geodynamics.org]

Author: brad
Date: 2010-06-08 12:55:21 -0700 (Tue, 08 Jun 2010)
New Revision: 16939

Modified:
   short/3D/PyLith/trunk/doc/userguide/tutorials/3dhex8/3dhex8.lyx
Log:
A few minor edits.

Modified: short/3D/PyLith/trunk/doc/userguide/tutorials/3dhex8/3dhex8.lyx
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--- short/3D/PyLith/trunk/doc/userguide/tutorials/3dhex8/3dhex8.lyx	2010-06-08 19:39:04 UTC (rev 16938)
+++ short/3D/PyLith/trunk/doc/userguide/tutorials/3dhex8/3dhex8.lyx	2010-06-08 19:55:21 UTC (rev 16939)
@@ -188,11 +188,8 @@
 \end_inset
 
  mesh generation package.
- Each example builds on the previous examples, as new features are demonstrated.
- We will walk through the steps necessary to construct, run, and view several
- problems that use the same mesh.
- In addition to this manual, each of the files for the example problems
- includes extensive comments.
+ Each example builds on the previous examples, as we demonstrate new features.
+ As in the other examples, the files include extensive comments.
  We start with the generation of the mesh, which is composed of 144 trilinear
  hexahedra.
  The tutorial demonstrates the usage of the CUBIT mesh generation package
@@ -206,7 +203,8 @@
  file, which contains information common to all the simulations.
  The tutorial is then subdivided into four sections, each pertaining to
  a particular set of PyLith features.
- It is suggested that users go through each of these sections in order.
+ It is suggested that users go through each of these sections in order as
+ the complexity increases at each step.
  All of the files to run the examples are contained in the directory 
 \family typewriter
 examples/3d/hex8
@@ -230,14 +228,14 @@
  Although it would be possible to generate this mesh by hand, it is much
  simpler to use a mesh generation package, and we use the CUBIT mesh generation
  package for this example.
- For this simple example, we provide documented journal files in 
+ We provide documented journal files in 
 \family typewriter
 examples/3d/hex8/mesh.
 
 \family default
- Investigation of these journal files should provide some insight into how
+ Dissection of these journal files should provide some insight into how
  to use CUBIT with PyLith.
- For more detailed information on using CUBIT, refer to the CUBIT web site
+ For more detailed information on using CUBIT, refer to the CUBIT documentation
  
 \begin_inset Flex URL
 status collapsed
@@ -333,7 +331,7 @@
 box_hex8_1000m.exo
 \family default
 , which contains all of the mesh information.
- This includes all of the information included in PyLith mesh ASCII format,
+ This information is similar to that included in PyLith mesh ASCII format,
  but the information is contained in an Exodus file, which is a specialized
  netCDF file.
  If you have the 
@@ -348,10 +346,6 @@
 \end_layout
 
 \begin_layout Standard
-This mesh may then be used for the examples described later in the tutorial.
-\end_layout
-
-\begin_layout Standard
 \noindent
 \align center
 \begin_inset Float figure
@@ -376,7 +370,7 @@
 
 \begin_layout Plain Layout
 Mesh composed of trilinear hexahedral cells generated by CUBIT used for
- the example problems.
+ the suite of example problems.
  The different colors represent the two different materials.
 \begin_inset CommandInset label
 LatexCommand label
@@ -526,7 +520,7 @@
 \family typewriter
 .cfg
 \family default
- files for some of the examples.
+ files in some of the examples.
  Although the material groups are specified in 
 \family typewriter
 pylithapp.cfg
@@ -556,14 +550,14 @@
 
 \begin_layout Standard
 \begin_inset CommandInset include
-LatexCommand include
+LatexCommand input
 filename "static/static.lyx"
 
 \end_inset
 
 
 \begin_inset CommandInset include
-LatexCommand include
+LatexCommand input
 filename "quasistatic/quasistatic.lyx"
 
 \end_inset