[cig-commits] commit: More edits for reviewer comments.

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changeset:   161:956ae5206d67
tag:         tip
user:        Brad Aagaard <baagaard at usgs.gov>
date:        Tue Feb 05 16:58:04 2013 -0800
files:       response_jgr.tex
description:
More edits for reviewer comments.


diff -r ea734d8e36ef -r 956ae5206d67 response_jgr.tex
--- a/response_jgr.tex	Tue Feb 05 14:21:20 2013 -0800
+++ b/response_jgr.tex	Tue Feb 05 16:58:04 2013 -0800
@@ -117,7 +117,8 @@
  Multiple times, the authors may remove "in order" in language
  constructs like "in order to" ...for brevity
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-  Yes, the phrase ``in order to'' was used excessively.
+  Yes, the phrase ``in order to'' was used excessively. Most of them
+  have been removed.
 }%